Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 질문에 직접 답한 점은 좋지만, 동사 시제와 단어 형태를 수정해야 합니다. 과거의 어머니의 말을 설명하므로 “my mom said”를 사용하고, “unsafety”는 명사이므로 형용사 “unsafe”로 바꿔야 합니다. 또한 “because” 뒤에 어머니가 왜 자전거를 위험하다고 생각했는지 구체적인 이유를 덧붙이면 답변이 더 자연스럽고 효과적입니다.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my mom thought it was unsafe. She was worried that I might get injured while riding on busy streets. So, I usually played indoors or walked to school instead.

제안: 의미는 전달되지만 문장 구조가 부자연스럽습니다. “I think no” 대신 “I don’t think so” 또는 “No, I don’t think bikes are very popular”를 사용해야 합니다. 또한 “minor hobby”는 이 문맥에서 어색하므로 “not very popular” 또는 “a less common form of transportation”이 적절합니다. 자전거가 인기가 적은 이유와 간단한 예를 연결어와 함께 제시하면 내용과 논리성이 향상됩니다.

예시: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer to drive or use public transportation because the roads can be crowded and there are not enough bike lanes. However, cycling is becoming more common among young people and fitness enthusiasts.

× No, I didn't have a bike because my mom say it's so unsafety.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because my mom said it was so unsafe.

The question refers to the student's childhood, so the verb say must be in the past tense: said. The verb be after said should also be in the past tense: was. In addition, unsafety is not the correct adjective here; use unsafe to describe something that is not safe.

× No, I didn't have a bike because my mom say it's so unsafety.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because my mom said it was so unsafe.

Unsafety is a noun, but an adjective is needed after was to describe the bike or cycling conditions. Use unsafe, not unsafety.

× I think no it's so minor hobby in my country.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular. They are only a minor hobby in my country.

I think no is not a correct English structure for expressing disagreement or a negative opinion. Use I don't think followed by a complete clause, such as I don't think bikes are popular. The second sentence also needs a clear subject, so They refers to bikes.

× I think no it's so minor hobby in my country.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular. They are only a minor hobby in my country.

The singular countable noun hobby needs an article. Use a minor hobby, not minor hobby. Because the sentence is negative in meaning, only makes the intended meaning clearer and more natural.