Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. Respond directly with a clear yes/no answer, then add one or two specific details, such as when you used the bike, where you rode it, or how you felt about it.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed exploring the area with my friends.

제안: Your main idea is clear, but there are several grammatical and naturalness problems. Say “bikes are very popular,” not “very much popular,” and use the plural pronoun “they” because “bikes” is plural. Also, replace “in everyday world” with a specific phrase such as “for everyday transportation,” and support your opinion with a concrete reason or example.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in crowded cities. They are convenient for everyday transportation because they are affordable and help people avoid traffic jams.

× Yes, bikes are very much popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

Very is the appropriate adverb to modify the adjective popular. Very much is generally used with verbs, not with adjectives such as popular. Avoid saying very much popular; say very popular instead.

× It helps in everyday world and it is very convenient to use.

✓ They help in everyday life, and they are very convenient to use.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use they for bikes. The verb must also agree with the plural subject, so use help instead of helps. In addition, everyday life is the natural expression in this context.