Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Yes our family had a bike when I was about three or four years old
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
Yes, bikes have become very popular in our country. Post COVID everybody's worried about their health and to maintain their health they have started riding bikes very often.
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총점
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 72.0제안: Answer the question directly and add one specific supporting detail. Use a comma after “Yes,” and consider saying “we had a bike” rather than “our family had a bike,” which sounds less natural. You could mention who used the bike or what you did with it. Linking the details with “and” would make the response smoother.
예시: Yes, we had a bike when I was about three or four years old. My older brother and I often took turns riding it around our neighborhood, although I needed my parents’ help at first.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 76.0제안: Your answer is relevant and includes a clear reason, but some phrases are repetitive or unnatural. Replace “Post COVID” with “Since the COVID-19 pandemic” and avoid repeating “health” by saying “stay healthy.” Also, use a more specific result or example, such as increased cycling in parks or bike lanes, to make the answer more effective.
예시: Yes, bikes have become very popular in my country, especially since the COVID-19 pandemic. Many people started cycling to stay healthy and avoid crowded public transport. Nowadays, it is common to see people riding bikes in parks and along dedicated bike lanes.
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