Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 질문에 직접 답한 점은 좋지만, ‘bite’는 ‘bike’로 발음해야 하며 ‘I couldn’t manage’와 ‘I couldn’t catch it’은 이 문맥에서 부자연스럽습니다. ‘I couldn’t keep my balance’와 ‘I wasn’t very athletic’처럼 자연스러운 표현을 사용하세요. 또한 ‘my father teach me’는 ‘my father taught me’로 고쳐야 합니다. 같은 의미를 반복하기보다 이유와 결과를 연결어로 간결하게 설명하고, 최대 3~4문장으로 답변하는 것이 좋습니다.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I couldn’t keep my balance. My father taught me how to ride one, but I found it quite difficult. I wasn’t very athletic, so I eventually gave up.

제안: 첫 문장에서 의견을 직접 제시한 점은 좋지만, 답변이 ‘isn’t as crucial’에서 중단되어 완결성이 부족합니다. ‘pupils are suffering from abundant studies’와 ‘While studying a lot, people can ride a bike at the same time’은 의미가 불명확하므로, ‘students have heavy academic workloads’와 ‘they don’t have much free time’처럼 표현하세요. ‘However’나 ‘As a result’를 사용해 학업 부담과 자전거의 낮은 인기를 논리적으로 연결하고, 자전거를 이용하는 사람이나 장소 같은 구체적인 예를 추가하면 좋습니다.

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Most students have heavy academic workloads, so they don’t have much free time to ride. However, bikes are becoming more common in parks and along rivers, especially on weekends.

× Handling the balance is very a tough test for me because my exercise prowess is too poor.

✓ Handling the balance is a very tough test for me because my exercise prowess is too poor.

The adverb very must be placed before the adjective tough but after the article a. The correct pattern is a very + adjective + noun, not very a + adjective + noun.

× Though my father teach me how to ride a bike, I couldn't catch it at all.

✓ Though my father taught me how to ride a bike, I couldn't catch it at all.

The question asks about a childhood experience, so the sentence should use the past tense. The past tense of teach is taught, not teach.