Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. Respond directly with a clear yes-or-no answer, then add one or two supporting details, such as when you used the bike, where you rode it, or why you liked or disliked it.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school. It was a simple blue bike, but I really enjoyed using it.

제안: Your answer is direct and gives a clear reason, but use the plural form consistently: say “bikes aren’t popular” rather than “it’s not popular.” Improve the flow by adding a linking word such as “because” or “as a result,” and make the explanation more specific by mentioning that cars are more convenient for traveling long distances and going uphill.

예시: No, bikes aren’t very popular in my country, especially in large, mountainous cities. This is because people often need to travel long distances, and driving is more convenient than cycling uphill. As a result, most residents prefer to use cars or public transportation.

× No, it's not popular because our city is big and mountainous so people have to go around with their cars.

✓ No, bikes aren't popular because our city is big and mountainous, so people have to travel by car.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use the plural subject bikes or the plural pronoun they. Also, by car is the more natural prepositional phrase for describing transportation. The comma before so helps separate the two clauses.