Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly in the past tense: use “had” and “was,” not “have” and “is.” Use “was yellow” to describe the bike and “cost” or “was worth” instead of “valid.” You should also organize the answer into a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific details. For example, mention who bought it, how often you used it, or where you rode it. Avoid repeating “the bike.”

예시: Yes, I had a yellow bike when I was a child. My father bought it for about 500 Malaysian ringgit. I often rode it around my neighborhood and used it to visit my friends.

제안: Begin with a clear answer, such as “No, I don’t think bikes are very popular.” Then explain the main reason using accurate grammar: “Most people use Grab cars” and “students are taken to school.” Use linking words such as “because” and “as a result” to connect your ideas. The final phrase, “the bicycle the past hours,” is unclear, so replace it with a specific comparison or explanation, such as saying that bicycles were more popular in the past or are mainly used for exercise today.

예시: No, I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country. Most students use Grab cars or other forms of transport to get to school because they are more convenient. As a result, relatively few young people cycle regularly, although bicycles are still popular for exercise and recreation.

× I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past period, so the verb have must be changed to its past-tense form, had.

× The bike is colour yellow.

✓ The bike was yellow.

Because the bike was being described during the speaker's childhood, the present-tense verb is must be changed to the past-tense verb was. Yellow is the natural adjective here; colour is unnecessary.

× My father valid in about 500 ringgit Malaysia.

✓ My father valued it at about 500 Malaysian ringgit.

The verb must be in the past tense because this happened in the past. The correct verb is valued, and it needs the object it to show what was valued. The natural currency expression is Malaysian ringgit.

× Around in my country

✓ In my country

Around is unnecessary in this expression. Use in my country to introduce a general situation in a country.

× Mostly people

✓ Most people

Most is used before a plural countable noun such as people. Mostly is an adverb and cannot normally be used directly before people in this sentence.

× People ... they came using a Grab car.

✓ People ... go to school by Grab car.

The student is describing a usual situation in the country, so the present tense go is required instead of the past-tense verb came.

× So not many students really use the bicycle but the bicycle the past hours

✓ Therefore, not many students really use bicycles, although bicycles were more popular in the past.

The original ending is incomplete and does not contain a clear grammatical structure. The correction connects the ideas with although and uses the complete phrase more popular in the past.