Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答基本表达了“小时候不骑自行车，因为比较懒，通常乘地铁”，但部分内容不清楚，影响理解。注意时态和词汇：应使用过去时“took”， “sub”应改为“subway”， “I have a little bit lazy”应改为“I was a little lazy”，而“color”很可能想表达“buy a bicycle”，应直接说“buy one”。建议先直接回答“没有”，再补充原因和出行方式，并使用“because”连接细节。

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I was a little lazy, so I usually took the subway to school or the park. Also, my parents often drove me around, so I didn’t really need to buy one.

제안: 你的回答提到了人们更喜欢开车，但答案没有完整结束，也没有直接清楚地回答自行车是否流行。应避免重复表达“In my perspective, I think”，可以说“In my opinion”。注意主谓一致和搭配： “cars are”， “many people choose to drive cars”， “my dad always drives”。此外，“Mini people”不符合语境，可能想说“many people”；建议先承认自行车在某些人群中流行，再进行汽车与自行车的比较，并给出具体例子。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in crowded cities. However, many adults prefer cars because they are more comfortable and convenient. For example, my dad usually drives to work instead of cycling.

× Well, I have to say that in my childhood I always take the sub away, go to the park or my school because I have a little bit lazy actually.

✓ Well, I have to say that in my childhood I always took the subway to the park or my school because I was a little lazy.

“In my childhood”表示过去时间，所以动词要使用过去式。“take”应改为“took”，“have”应改为“was”。另外，“because”后面需要完整的主语和谓语。

× I always take the sub away.

✓ I always took the subway.

表示乘坐地铁时，通常说“take the subway”，而不是“take the sub away”。“the”用于特指这种交通工具。

× I have a little bit lazy actually.

✓ I was a little lazy, actually.

“lazy”是形容词，前面不能直接使用“have”。这里应使用系动词“be”的过去式“was”。“a little lazy”比“a little bit lazy”更自然。

× Many people came on to drive these cars because cars is more comfortable and convenient.

✓ Many people choose to drive cars because cars are more comfortable and convenient.

主语“cars”是复数，所以后面的系动词应使用“are”，不能使用单数形式“is”。

× Many people came on to drive these cars because cars is more comfortable and convenient.

✓ Many people choose to drive cars because cars are more comfortable and convenient.

这个回答讨论的是现在本国的普遍情况，因此应使用一般现在时。“came”是过去式，这里应改为现在时“choose”。

× Cars are more comfortable and convenient for Mini people.

✓ Cars are more comfortable and convenient for many people.

“Mini people”不能表示“很多人”。表达数量多时，应使用数量词“many”，所以应改为“many people”。

× My dad always drive his cars to school work.

✓ My dad always drives his car to school or work.

主语“My dad”是第三人称单数，在一般现在时中，动词要加“-s”，所以“drive”应改为“drives”。

× For example, my dad always drive his cars to school work and

✓ For example, my dad always drives his car to school or work.

原句以“and”结尾，句子没有完成，属于结构不完整。同时，“school work”之间缺少连接词。可以说“to school or work”，使句子结构完整、意思清楚。