Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 時制と動詞の形を修正しましょう。過去の出来事なので「ride」ではなく「rode」または「had」を使います。また、「unico」が自転車の名前であれば、自然な表現で説明してください。まず直接答え、その後に自転車の種類や使い道などの具体的な情報を1つ加えると、より自然で効果的な回答になります。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was six years old. It was a small blue bike, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

제안: 文の構成と語句を整理しましょう。「the people who ride bike」は不自然なので、「people riding bikes」や「people ride bikes」と言えます。また、「ride bike」は「ride bikes」、「Everybody」は文脈に合うように「I used to ride my bike to school」などに直します。最初に人気があるかを明確に答え、「also」や「because」などのリンク語を使って、観察したことや自分の経験を具体的に述べましょう。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people riding them in parks and residential areas. I also used to ride my bike to school because it was convenient and inexpensive.

× Yes, when I was six years old, I ride unico.

✓ Yes, when I was six years old, I rode a unicycle.

The phrase when I was six years old refers to a finished period in the past, so the past-tense form rode is required instead of the present-tense form ride. The correct noun is unicycle.

× Yes, when I was six years old, I ride unico.

✓ Yes, when I was six years old, I rode a unicycle.

The singular countable noun unicycle needs the indefinite article a because it refers to one unicycle that has not been mentioned before.

× Yes, I often see the people who ride bike and also I use bike Everybody to go to school.

✓ Yes, I often see people who ride bikes, and I also use a bike every day to go to school.

The plural subject people refers to more than one person, so the countable noun bike should be plural when referring to bikes in general. Use bikes rather than bike in this context.

× Yes, I often see the people who ride bike and also I use bike Everybody to go to school.

✓ Yes, I often see people who ride bikes, and I also use a bike every day to go to school.

A singular countable noun such as bike needs an article. Use a bike when referring to one bike in a general, non-specific way. The article the is unnecessary before people when speaking about people in general.

× Yes, I often see the people who ride bike and also I use bike Everybody to go to school.

✓ Yes, I often see people who ride bikes, and I also use a bike every day to go to school.

The original sentence joins two ideas without clear punctuation or parallel structure. Use and to connect the two complete ideas, place also before the main verb use, and use every day to express frequency. Avoid using Everybody to mean every day.