Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接，但有明显语法和搭配错误。“brought me brought it”应改为“bought one for me”或“bought me a bike”。建议补充一个具体细节，例如你多大时拥有自行车、在哪里骑，以及它给你带来的感受。

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was about eight years old, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: 回答表达了原因，但“the bag”应为“biking”或“riding a bike”，而且“is free and is healthy”表达不自然。可以说“cycling is free and good for your health”，并补充另一个具体原因，例如自行车可以避免交通堵塞或减少污染。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because cycling is free and good for your health. In addition, bikes are convenient for short trips and can help people avoid traffic jams.

× Of course my parents brought me brought it for me

✓ Of course, my parents bought it for me.

句子中重复使用了“brought”，导致句子结构错误。这里想表达“父母给我买了一辆自行车”，应使用过去式“bought”，并直接说“bought it for me”。“Of course”位于句首时，后面通常加逗号。

× Yes because the bag is free and is healthy

✓ Yes, because biking is free and healthy.

“bag”不是“bike”的正确表达；此外，“healthy”通常用来描述骑自行车这项活动，而不是自行车本身。因此使用动名词“biking”作主语。并列形容词“free”和“healthy”共同描述“biking”时，不需要重复使用第二个“is”。