Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Use the past tense consistently: say “didn’t have” rather than “don’t have,” and “was” rather than “were” with “I.” Also, “bike” and “bicycle” have the same meaning, so the answer is slightly repetitive. Answer directly and add one specific detail, such as how you travelled or why you did not own one.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually walked to school or took the bus because my parents thought cycling on the busy roads was unsafe.

제안: Give a clear opinion with a complete sentence and explain it with a reason. The phrase “I don’t think so it’s only cars” is grammatically incorrect and too brief. You could say that bikes are less popular than cars and mention a specific reason, such as long distances, heavy traffic, or limited cycling lanes.

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer cars because they are more convenient for long journeys, and many cities do not have safe or well-developed cycle lanes.

× No, I don't have a bike when I were a child, but I have a bicycle.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I had a bicycle.

The question refers to the past, so the verbs should be in the simple past tense. Use did not (didn't) instead of don't have, and use was with the subject I. The verb have should also be changed to had to keep the sentence consistently in the past tense.

× I don't think so it's only cars.

✓ I don't think so. People mostly drive cars.

The original sentence incorrectly joins two independent ideas without appropriate punctuation or sentence structure. Use a full stop after so, and express the second idea as a complete sentence with a subject and a verb. When answering questions about popularity, you can also say, I don't think bikes are very popular because most people drive cars.