Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 質問には直接答えられていますが、同じ内容を繰り返しているだけで、理由や具体的な思い出がありません。例えば、どこで乗ったか、誰と乗ったか、どのように感じたかを1文追加すると、より自然で内容のある回答になります。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: “I think so”の後に文を続ける場合は、文を正しくつなぐ必要があります。また、“use use bike”は誤りなので、“use bikes”または“ride bikes”に直してください。自転車が人気である理由や、どのような人が使うのかを具体的に説明すると、内容と語彙の幅が向上します。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many students ride them to school because they are convenient and inexpensive, especially in smaller towns.

× Yes, I think so some people use use bike when they go to school.

✓ Yes, I think so. Some people use bikes when they go to school.

The plural noun bikes is needed because the sentence refers to bicycles in general, not one specific bicycle. Also, use was repeated accidentally. Separating the two independent ideas with a full stop makes the sentence clearer.

× Yes, I think so some people use use bike when they go to school.

✓ Yes, I think so. Some people use bikes when they go to school.

The original sentence incorrectly joins two complete ideas without punctuation or a conjunction: I think so and some people use bikes. Use a full stop to separate them. Do not repeat the verb use.