Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你没有回答考官的问题，而是重复了问题。应先直接回答“Yes, I did.”或“No, I didn’t.”，然后补充一两个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、使用场景或童年感受。注意使用完整句子，并避免只重复题目。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: 你的回答观点明确，也提供了过去与现在的对比以及具体场景，内容较充实。需要改进语法和用词：将“nowadays cars becoming”改为“nowadays cars are becoming”，“these days”与“nowadays”不要重复；“morning trials”应改为“morning rides”或“morning cycling”。此外，可以使用“However”或“Nowadays”使逻辑更自然。

예시: Bikes were very popular in China when I was young. However, cars have become more common nowadays, so people rarely use bikes for transportation. That said, many people still cycle for exercise, and you can see groups of cyclists riding in the morning.

× But actually nowadays cars becoming more popular these days.

✓ But actually, nowadays cars are becoming more popular these days.

“becoming”用于现在进行时，前面必须加助动词“are”。主语“cars”是复数，所以要使用“are”，不能直接说“cars becoming”。另外，“actually”和“nowadays”后加逗号可以使句子结构更清晰。