Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and avoid repeating “because.” Use the natural phrase “when I was a child” and say “too young to ride a bike” rather than “too young for driving.” You could also add one specific detail explaining who was concerned about your safety or what you used instead.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was unsafe for me. I was too young to ride on the busy roads, so I usually walked or took the bus instead.

제안: State your opinion clearly and use accurate vocabulary: “bikes,” not “mikes,” “the easiest way,” not “very easiest way,” and “in less time,” not “in unless time.” Use a linking word such as “because” to connect your reasons, and add a specific example of who commonly rides bikes or where they ride them.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to travel. They help people get around in less time and save money on fuel and public transport. Many students and office workers use them for short journeys.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was child because it was not safe for me because I was too young for driving.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because it was not safe for me because I was too young for driving.

The singular countable noun child requires an article. Use a before child because you are referring to one nonspecific period of childhood.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was child because it was not safe for me because I was too young for driving.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because it was not safe for me because I was too young to drive.

After too young, use the infinitive form to express an activity that someone is not old enough to do: too young to drive. The phrase too young for driving is not the appropriate structure in this sentence.

× Yes, I think mikes are very popular in my country. It is very easiest way to go somewhere in unless time and it also saves a lot of money.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. It is the easiest way to go somewhere in less time, and it also saves a lot of money.

Easiest is a superlative adjective, so it should not be preceded by very. Use the definite article the before a superlative: the easiest way.

× Yes, I think mikes are very popular in my country. It is very easiest way to go somewhere in unless time and it also saves a lot of money.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. It is the easiest way to go somewhere in less time, and it also saves a lot of money.

A singular countable noun phrase such as easiest way requires an article. Because easiest is a superlative, the correct article is the.

× Yes, I think mikes are very popular in my country. It is very easiest way to go somewhere in unless time and it also saves a lot of money.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. It is the easiest way to go somewhere in less time, and it also saves a lot of money.

Time is an uncountable noun, and less is the appropriate quantifier when comparing an amount of time. Unless is a conjunction and cannot be used to describe the amount of time.