Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is grammatically correct and directly answers the question, but it is too brief to demonstrate your speaking ability. Add one or two supporting details, such as when you used the bike, where you rode it, or how you felt about it. Use a linking word such as “especially” or “because” to make the response more developed and natural.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight years old, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school. I especially enjoyed cycling with my friends at the weekend.

제안: You give a clear opinion and a reason, but “much people” is incorrect because “people” is countable; say “many people.” The phrase “usually on streets” is also unnatural; use “on the streets” or “in the city.” To make the answer more effective, add a specific explanation, such as traffic, public transportation, or the availability of bike lanes.

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because I rarely see many people cycling on the streets. Most people prefer to use cars or public transportation, especially in large cities where the roads are busy. In addition, there aren’t enough safe bike lanes.

× I guess not really because I don't see much people on bikes usually on streets.

✓ I guess not really because I don't see many people on bikes usually on the streets.

People is a plural countable noun, so it must be used with many, not much. Use many with plural countable nouns and much with uncountable nouns. For example: many people, many bikes, much water.

× I guess not really because I don't see much people on bikes usually on streets.

✓ I guess not really because I don't see many people on bikes usually on the streets.

The phrase on the streets refers to streets in general as a familiar setting, so the definite article the is appropriate here. Use on the streets rather than on streets in this context.