Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. Respond directly with a clear answer, then add one or two specific details, such as when you used the bike and where you rode it.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was about eight years old. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed cycling with my friends.

제안: Your answer has a clear topic sentence and relevant reasons, but the final sentence contains repetition and incorrect wording. Replace “they are used for because they are useless fuel than cars” with a natural expression such as “they use less fuel than cars.” Use a linking word such as “Moreover” to connect the additional reason, and give a specific example of where people ride bikes.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. They are affordable and convenient, particularly in crowded cities where traffic is often heavy. Moreover, bikes use less fuel than cars, so many people use them for commuting to work or school.

× Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. They are affordable, convenient and useful for getting through traffic. Many people also prefer bikes because they are used for because they are useless fuel than cars.

✓ Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. They are affordable, convenient, and useful for getting through traffic. Many people also prefer bikes because they use less fuel than cars.

Less is the correct quantifier for an uncountable noun such as fuel. Useless means having no use, so it does not express the intended meaning. The phrase use less fuel correctly compares the amount of fuel consumed by bikes and cars.

× Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. They are affordable, convenient and useful for getting through traffic. Many people also prefer bikes because they are used for because they are useless fuel than cars.

✓ Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. They are affordable, convenient, and useful for getting through traffic. Many people also prefer bikes because they use less fuel than cars.

The original sentence contains a repeated because and the incorrect structure are used for before the phrase they are useless fuel. The sentence should use the complete structure because they use less fuel than cars. Avoid repeating conjunctions and make sure the clause after because has a clear subject and verb.