Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly in the past tense: “Yes, I had a bike when I was six.” Use “had,” “was,” and “bought,” rather than “have,” “am,” and “brought.” Avoid repetition such as “amazing,” “beautiful,” and repeated false starts. Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific details, such as the bike’s brand and why you liked it.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was six. My father bought me a new Hero Honda, and I was thrilled because it looked stylish and was very comfortable to ride. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

제안: Use the plural form “bikes” and make the explanation more natural: “Bikes are popular because many cities are crowded and have heavy traffic.” Avoid repeating “my country,” and replace “people are more prefer” with “people prefer.” Add a specific supporting detail, such as bikes being cheaper, easier to park, or more convenient than cars, and connect the ideas with linking words such as “because” or “therefore.”

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in large cities. Since the roads are often crowded and parking is expensive, many people prefer motorcycles to cars. They are also more affordable and convenient for commuting.

× I have bike in my childhood.

✓ I had a bike in my childhood.

The phrase in my childhood refers to a finished period in the past, so the past-tense verb had is required instead of have.

× I have bike in my childhood.

✓ I had a bike in my childhood.

A singular countable noun such as bike needs an article. Use a because the bike is not previously specified.

× When I am 6 year old, my father brought me a new bike.

✓ When I was six years old, my father bought me a new bike.

The sentence describes a past childhood experience, so am must change to was. Bought is also the more appropriate past-tense form for the action of purchasing a bike.

× When I am 6 year old, my father brought me a new bike.

✓ When I was six years old, my father bought me a new bike.

After a number greater than one, the noun year must be plural: six years.

× It's an amazing it's a brand name is Hero Honda.

✓ It's amazing. Its brand name is Hero Honda.

The original sentence incorrectly joins two complete sentences and repeats the subject. Separate the ideas with a full stop. Use its to show possession when referring to the bike's brand name.

× It's really it's beautiful and beautiful.

✓ It's really beautiful.

The original sentence contains an unnecessary repeated subject and repeats the adjective. Use one complete clause with the adverb really before the adjective beautiful.

× Yeah, bike is more popular in my country because my country is more populated and congested traffic.

✓ Yes, bikes are more popular in my country because my country has a large population and congested traffic.

When speaking about bikes in general, use the plural noun bikes and the plural verb are. A singular countable noun cannot normally be used without an article.

× Yeah, bike is more popular in my country because my country is more populated and congested traffic.

✓ Yes, bikes are more popular in my country because my country has a large population and congested traffic.

The singular noun bike needs an article, but the general meaning is more naturally expressed with the plural form bikes.

× Yeah, bike is more popular in my country because my country is more populated and congested traffic.

✓ Yes, bikes are more popular in my country because my country has a large population and congested traffic.

The phrase more populated and congested traffic is not grammatically parallel. Use has with the noun phrases a large population and congested traffic.

× In those times, people are more prefer to use bikes rather than cars.

✓ Nowadays, people prefer to use bikes rather than cars.

Prefer is already a verb and cannot be used with the comparative form more. Use people prefer. Nowadays is also suitable for a general statement about current preferences.