Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng nghiêm trọng. Hãy dùng thì quá khứ vì câu hỏi hỏi về thời thơ ấu: “Yes, I had a bike.” Sửa “Pike” thành “bike”, “bought bought” thành “bought”, và dùng “on my birthday” thay vì “in my birthday”. Bạn cũng nên thêm một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn như màu sắc, nơi bạn thường đạp xe hoặc cảm xúc của bạn. Câu trả lời nên được liên kết tự nhiên bằng “because” hoặc “and”.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me on my birthday, and it was bright red. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: Bạn có ý trả lời đúng nhưng câu có nhiều lỗi về cấu trúc, từ vựng và cách diễn đạt. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng: “Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.” Sửa “in my countries” thành “in my country”, “Walker” thành “workers”, “student” thành “students”, và dùng “walk or ride a bike” thay cho “go to walk”. Ngoài ra, “use bikes to go to work and school” là cách diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sắp xếp ý theo trình tự: mức độ phổ biến, đối tượng sử dụng và lý do, đồng thời dùng “especially” hoặc “because” để liên kết thông tin.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and workers. Many students ride bikes to school, while some workers use them to commute. They are affordable, convenient, and useful for avoiding traffic in crowded cities.

× Yes, I have a Pike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

Because the question asks about your childhood, use the past tense had instead of the present tense have. Bike is also the correct spelling.

× When I was a child that was the bike which my parents bought bought for me in my birthday.

✓ When I was a child, that was the bike which my parents bought for me on my birthday.

The past-tense verb bought is repeated unnecessarily, so it should appear only once. The sentence refers to a past event, so bought is the correct tense.

× When I was a child that was the bike which my parents bought bought for me in my birthday.

✓ When I was a child, that was the bike which my parents bought for me on my birthday.

Use on with a specific day or date, such as on my birthday, not in my birthday.

× Yes, by the popular in my countries as a lot of people in the country like Walker or student frequently use bike to go to walk and go to school.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because many people, such as workers and students, frequently use bikes to go to work and school.

The original sentence does not have a clear grammatical structure. Use the subject bikes with the verb are, and use because to introduce the reason. The phrase by the popular is not grammatical; the correct expression is are popular.

× Yes, by the popular in my countries as a lot of people in the country like Walker or student frequently use bike to go to walk and go to school.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because many people, such as workers and students, frequently use bikes to go to work and school.

Country refers to one country here, so use the singular form country. Workers, students, and bikes refer to more than one person or object, so they should be plural.

× Yes, by the popular in my countries as a lot of people in the country like Walker or student frequently use bike to go to walk and go to school.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because many people, such as workers and students, frequently use bikes to go to work and school.

When speaking about bikes in general, use the plural form bikes without an article. If referring to one particular bike, use a bike instead.