Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly with a complete sentence, such as “Yes, I did.” Avoid hesitation and use the correct expression “learn how to ride a bike,” not “write it” or “learned it.” Organize the answer logically: state when you got the bike, explain who bought it, and describe your experience. Use a linking word such as “although” or “eventually” to connect the difficulty and the positive result. Also, say “one of my best childhood memories” to sound more natural.

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was in second grade, and my dad bought it for me as a birthday present. Although it was difficult to learn how to ride at first, I eventually got the hang of it after a few minor accidents. It became one of my best childhood memories.

제안: Give a clear opinion once and avoid repeating words such as “because,” “the,” and “so.” Use the natural term “bike lanes” or “cycling infrastructure” instead of “the road for the bike.” Support your opinion with a specific explanation, such as heavy traffic, a lack of bike lanes, or unsafe drivers. Use one linking structure, for example, “because” followed by a result with “as a result.”

예시: I would say bikes are not very popular in my country because many cities lack safe bike lanes. The roads are often crowded with cars, and drivers do not always pay attention to cyclists. As a result, people usually prefer to use public transportation or drive instead of cycling around the city.

× Yes, I had uh, when I was in second grade.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was in second grade.

The original sentence is structurally incomplete because the verb had needs an object in this context. One replaces the previously mentioned bike and completes the sentence. Avoid stopping after had when the listener needs to know what you possessed.

× I would say no because Because the The road for the bike is not that safe.

✓ I would say no because the roads for bikes are not that safe.

The sentence refers to roads and bikes in general, so the plural forms roads and bikes are more appropriate than the singular forms road and bike. Use plural nouns when making a general statement about a whole category.

× I would say no because Because the The road for the bike is not that safe.

✓ I would say no because the roads for bikes are not that safe.

The phrase the bike incorrectly suggests one specific bike. When referring to bikes generally, do not use the before the plural noun bikes. The article the is appropriate before roads here because the speaker is referring to the roads in the country or city being discussed.