Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 最初の文は質問に直接答えていますが、2文目の「I loved working」は文脈に合わず、不自然です。「working」が「walking（歩くこと）」の間違いであれば、正しい単語を使いましょう。また、理由や具体例を1つ加えると、より自然で内容のある回答になります。

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I preferred walking because my school was close to my home, and my parents were worried that cycling might be dangerous.

제안: 意見は明確ですが、「everyone using」は「everyone uses」、「bike」は一般的な意味なので「bikes」、「in our life」は「in our daily lives」とする必要があります。また、なぜ人気なのかを「because」などの接続語で説明し、通勤・健康・環境などの具体的な理由を加えましょう。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for commuting and short trips because they are affordable and environmentally friendly. They are especially common in cities with dedicated cycling lanes.

× Yes, I think everyone using bike and it's necessary in our life

✓ Yes, I think everyone uses a bike, and it's necessary in our life.

Everyone is a singular indefinite pronoun, so the present-tense verb must be uses, not using. The phrase everyone using is incomplete because it lacks a properly conjugated main verb.

× Yes, I think everyone using bike and it's necessary in our life

✓ Yes, I think everyone uses a bike, and it's necessary in our life.

A singular countable noun such as bike normally needs an article. Use a bike when referring to one bike in a general statement.

× Yes, I think everyone using bike and it's necessary in our life

✓ Yes, I think everyone uses a bike, and it's necessary in our lives.

The possessive determiner our refers to more than one person, so the noun should normally be plural: our lives. Using lives makes the expression grammatically consistent and more natural.