Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan cevap veriyor ve kişisel bir ayrıntı içeriyor; ancak cümle yapısı ve kelime seçimleri doğal değil. “My father bought it as together” ve “for using together” ifadeleri yanlış; bunların yerine “My father bought one for my brother and me to share” diyebilirsiniz. Ayrıca “I couldn’t ride a bike” ifadesi, geçmişte bisiklet sürmeyi öğrenemediğinizi anlatıyorsa doğrudur; nedenini eklemek cevabı daha etkili yapar. “Unfortunately” kelimesini cümlenin sonunda kullanmanız uygundur, fakat cevap 2–3 doğal cümleyle daha akıcı hâle getirilebilir.

예시: Yes, I did. My father bought a bike for my brother and me to share when we were children. Unfortunately, I never learned how to ride it properly because I was afraid of falling.

제안: Cevabınız genel olarak soruyu yanıtlıyor ve trafik ile ulaşım sorunlarına değiniyor; ancak “traffic conjunction” yanlış bir ifade, burada “traffic congestion” kullanılmalı. “For some commuting problems” ve “prefer cycling to” yapıları tamamlanmamış veya doğal değil. Daha iyi bir yapı için önce görüşünüzü açıkça belirtin, ardından “because” ile neden verin ve “For example” ile somut bir sonuç ekleyin. “People in my country” ifadesi “our people”dan daha doğal olur. Ayrıca bisikletlerin neden popüler olduğunu; trafik, yakıt maliyeti veya çevre gibi spesifik nedenlerle açıklayabilirsiniz.

예시: Yes, they are becoming increasingly popular, especially in large cities. Many people choose to cycle because traffic congestion makes commuting by car stressful and expensive. For example, some commuters use bikes for short journeys to avoid traffic and reduce their transport costs.

× When I was a child I had a bike with my brother and my father bought it as together and for using together, but I couldn't ride a bike unfortunately.

✓ When I was a child, my father bought a bike for my brother and me to use together, but unfortunately, I couldn't ride it.

The original sentence incorrectly combines several ideas and uses the unnatural structure bought it as together. Organize the sentence into a clear subject-verb-object structure: my father bought a bike for my brother and me.

× for using together

✓ to use together

After bought a bike for someone, the infinitive to use is used to express the purpose of the purchase. For using is not appropriate in this structure.

× with my brother

✓ for my brother and me

The pronoun me is required because it follows the preposition for and functions as the object of the preposition. The subject pronoun I would be incorrect in this position.

× Yes, of course, especially nowadays bikes are more popular in my country because traffic conjunction and also some commuting problems.

✓ Yes, of course. Especially nowadays, bikes are more popular in my country because of traffic congestion and other commuting problems.

The phrase after because is incomplete and does not contain a verb. Because of must be followed by a noun phrase, so because of traffic congestion is the correct structure. Also, congestion means heavy traffic; conjunction does not have this meaning.

× because traffic conjunction and also some commuting problems

✓ because of traffic congestion and other commuting problems

Because introduces a clause containing a subject and a verb, whereas because of introduces a noun phrase. Since traffic congestion and commuting problems are noun phrases, because of is required.

× For some commuting problems, I observe that our people prefer cycling to.

✓ Because of these commuting problems, I observe that people in my country prefer cycling, too.

For does not correctly express the cause in this sentence. Because of is the appropriate preposition because it introduces the reason. The final to is unnecessary; if you mean also, use too.

× For some commuting problems, I observe that our people prefer cycling to.

✓ Because of these commuting problems, I observe that people in my country prefer cycling, too.

The sentence ends with the incomplete expression prefer cycling to. The verb prefer can be followed by a gerund such as prefer cycling, and too can be added to express also. The sentence is therefore complete without the final to.