Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答切题，结构清楚，也提供了个人感受和具体活动。不过，叙述童年经历时应统一使用过去时：将“makes”改为“made”。“It makes me feel I'm flying”不够自然，建议改为“made me feel like I was flying”。另外，“spent all the spare time”应改为“spent almost all my free time”，并避免“I uh, I”的重复。

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a child, riding my bike with my friends was my favorite hobby. It made me feel like I was flying, and I spent almost all my free time cycling around my neighborhood.

제안: 回答直接，并给出了自行车受欢迎的原因，但结尾重复了前面的观点，影响语言效率。注意拼写和搭配：“unconvenient”应改为“inconvenient”，“especially in younger generations”更自然的表达是“especially among younger people”。此外，逻辑应更清晰：可以说明开车费用高、停车困难，因此自行车更经济方便。建议使用“because”或“as a result”连接原因和结果，并避免“car”和“us”指代不清。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among younger people. Many of them use bicycles because driving is expensive and parking can be difficult in crowded cities. As a result, bikes are seen as a convenient and affordable way to get around.

× It makes me feel I'm flying.

✓ It made me feel I was flying.

这段经历发生在过去，所以谓语动词应使用过去时：makes 改为 made，am 改为 was。这样可以保持整段回答的时态一致。

× I almost spent all the spare time riding with my friends.

✓ I almost spent all my spare time riding with my friends.

这里的 spare time 指学生自己的空闲时间，因此应使用物主限定词 my，而不是没有明确指代对象的定冠词 the。常见表达是 spend all my spare time doing something。

× Yes, bikes are pretty popular in my country, especially in younger generations because it's very unconvenient to travel everywhere with a car which is expensive and not so affordable for us.

✓ Yes, bikes are pretty popular in my country, especially among younger generations because it's very unconvenient to travel everywhere by car, which is expensive and not so affordable for us.

表示“乘坐某种交通工具”时，通常使用介词 by，因此 with a car 应改为 by car。表示“在某个群体中”时，among 比 in 更合适，所以 in younger generations 应改为 among younger generations。

× Yes, bikes are pretty popular in my country, especially in younger generations because it's very unconvenient to travel everywhere with a car which is expensive and not so affordable for us.

✓ Yes, bikes are pretty popular in my country, especially in younger generations because it's very unconvenient to travel everywhere by car which is expensive and not so affordable for us.

by car 是表示“乘汽车出行”的固定搭配；with a car 通常表示“带着一辆车”或“使用一辆车”，不适合表达交通方式。