Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly and focus on bicycles rather than motorbikes. The phrase “in my whole life” is unnatural in this context; use “when I was a child” or “I have never owned one.” Add a specific reason or example to develop your answer, and use a linking word such as “because.”

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was unsafe. As a result, I never learned how to ride one.

제안: Give a clear opinion and support it with a specific reason or example. Avoid repeating the same idea in “almost everyone” and “every home,” and replace “in their household” with the more natural phrase “in their home.” You could also mention how people use bikes, such as for commuting or shopping.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. Many people use them to commute to work or school because they are affordable and convenient. Most households have at least one bike.

× No, I never had a bike in my whole life and I don't know how to ride a motorbike.

✓ No, I never had a bike when I was a child, and I didn't know how to ride a motorbike.

The question asks about a past period, when you were a child, so the answer should consistently use the past tense. Use when I was a child instead of in my whole life to refer specifically to that period, and use didn't know to maintain the past-time context.

× Every home has one or two bikes in their household.

✓ Every household has one or two bikes.

Their refers to people, but the subject every home is not a person. In addition, home and household express nearly the same idea, so using Every household as the subject makes the sentence clearer and avoids the pronoun problem.