Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and avoid hesitation, repetition, and unnecessary fillers such as “kind of” and “but yeah.” Correct the grammar by saying “in my free time,” not “by doing my free time.” You could also explain what the bike looked like or why you enjoyed riding it. Use a clear structure: direct answer, description, and a supporting reason.

예시: Yes, I did, and I still have that bike today. It isn’t a sporty bike, but it is comfortable and reliable. I used to ride it around my neighborhood in my free time, especially during the weekends.

제안: Give a more natural and confident opening than “Yes, obviously,” and avoid fillers such as “uh.” Use the plural form “bikes” when speaking generally and say “ride their bikes to work.” Develop your answer with specific reasons, such as affordability, traffic, or convenience, and connect your ideas with linking words like “because” and “also.”

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Sri Lanka, especially because they are affordable and convenient. Many people ride them to work or school, and they are also useful for traveling through busy streets. In addition, cycling can help people save money on transportation.

× Yes, I did. I still have that bike and kind of, it's not very sporty, but yeah, most of the time I like to ride that by doing my free time.

✓ Yes, I did. I still have that bike. It is not very sporty, but I like to ride it in my free time.

The preposition by is incorrect in the expression by doing my free time. The natural expression is in my free time. Also, ride it is more natural than ride that when referring to a previously mentioned bike.

× Yes, obviously, because, uh, in Sri Lanka so many people ride bikes, to be specific. Uh, some people ride bike to their work as well, yeah.

✓ Yes, obviously. In Sri Lanka, many people ride bikes. To be specific, some people ride bikes to work as well.

The plural noun bikes is needed because the sentence refers to some people and bicycles in general. The singular form bike cannot be used without an article in this context. Use ride a bike for one bicycle or ride bikes when speaking generally.

× Yes, obviously, because, uh, in Sri Lanka so many people ride bikes, to be specific. Uh, some people ride bike to their work as well, yeah.

✓ Yes, obviously. In Sri Lanka, many people ride bikes. To be specific, some people ride bikes to work as well.

The article a is required before the singular countable noun bike, as in ride a bike. Since the sentence refers to bicycles generally, the plural form bikes is more suitable. Also, work usually does not take the article the when it refers to a person's usual workplace or activity, so say go or ride to work.