Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly and avoid repeating or correcting yourself. Use the past tense consistently: “had,” “remember,” and “used to ride.” The phrase “in my childhood” is understandable, but “when I was a child” sounds more natural, and “in my child” is incorrect. Add one specific detail, such as where you rode the bike or who gave it to you.

예시: Yes, I had a small bicycle when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school, especially at weekends. It was given to me by my parents, and I really enjoyed riding it with my friends.

제안: Give a clear opinion first, such as “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” Avoid the unnatural phrase “are most popular” and use “are very popular” or “are becoming increasingly popular.” Explain your answer with specific and relevant reasons, such as commuting, exercise, or environmental concerns. The sentence about races is unclear and does not fully support your opinion; also use “cycling races” or “races are held on bikes” instead of “races are done on bike.”

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and fitness enthusiasts. Many people use them for exercise and short journeys because they are convenient and environmentally friendly. In addition, cycling races and events have become more common in recent years.

× To be honest, I don't remember even if I have I have a bike in my childhood.

✓ To be honest, I don't remember whether I had a bike during my childhood.

Because the question refers to the student's childhood, the past tense had is required instead of have. Whether is more appropriate than even if because the speaker is describing uncertainty, not a condition. The repeated words I have should also be removed. Use whether or if to introduce an uncertain memory, and use the past tense for past experiences.

× But yes, I remember I have a small bicycle that I used to ride in my child.

✓ But yes, I remember that I had a small bicycle that I used to ride during my childhood.

The verb had should be used because the bicycle belonged to the speaker in the past. During my childhood is the correct expression; child is a person, whereas childhood refers to the period of life. Use had for past possession and during my childhood when referring to that period.

× To be honest, in my country bikes are most popular.

✓ To be honest, bikes are very popular in my country.

Most popular is a superlative form and normally requires the definite article the when referring to a specific group, as in the most popular bikes. Here, the intended meaning is general popularity, so very popular is more natural and grammatically appropriate. Place the location phrase at the end for a clearer sentence.

× As we can see in present time most of races are done on bike so that it will be.

✓ As we can see at present, most races are done by bike, so this will continue to be the case.

At present is the natural expression, not in present time. Most races does not need of, although most of the races is also possible. By bike is the standard expression for means of transportation. The original ending, so that it will be, is incomplete, so it has been changed to a complete future clause: this will continue to be the case. Use a complete clause after so that or so, and use will only when expressing a future result or expectation.