Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

연습Part12026-09-28 22:45:42

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Part 1

시험관

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

수험생

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

시험관

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

수험생

Yes, I do.

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총점

총점: 5.0유창성과 일관성: 5.0발음: 5.0문법: 5.0어휘: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

점수: 10.0

제안: Ответ не отвечает на вопрос, а повторяет его. Начните с прямого ответа «Yes, I did» или «No, I didn’t», затем добавьте 1–2 конкретные детали: когда вы получили велосипед, как часто катались и где именно. Используйте связку, например «because» или «so».

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

점수: 35.0

제안: Ответ грамматически правильный и прямой, но слишком короткий для IELTS Speaking Part 1. Добавьте причину и конкретный пример, используя связку «because» или «for example». Можно также упомянуть, кто чаще всего ездит на велосипедах и с какой целью.

예시: Yes, I do. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and fitness enthusiasts, because they are affordable and environmentally friendly. For example, many people ride them in parks or use them for short trips.

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