Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear, direct, and well organized. You give a relevant reason using “because,” which makes the response effective. However, use the possessive form “my friends’ houses” and consider adding one specific detail, such as where you rode your bike or how you felt about it, to make the answer more vivid.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to my friends’ houses every afternoon because it was faster than walking. I especially enjoyed cycling around my neighborhood and meeting my friends in the park.

제안: You answer the question directly, but the explanation is difficult to understand and contains unnatural expressions. Replace “due to which” with “because” or “mainly because,” and do not say that India is “a larger country” in this context. Use natural phrases such as “cover long distances” and support your opinion with a specific reason or example, such as affordability, traffic, or convenience.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in India, mainly because they are affordable and convenient for daily travel. Many people use them to commute to work or school, especially in areas where traffic is heavy. They are also cheaper to maintain than cars.

× Yes, I do think bikes are popular in our country due to which India is a larger country and we need bikes to go from one distance to another.

✓ Yes, I do think bikes are popular in our country because India is a large country and we need bikes to go from one distance to another.

The adjective larger is comparative, so it normally requires a comparison, such as larger than another country. Here, the intended meaning is that India has a large area, not that it is larger than another country. Therefore, use the positive adjective large.

× Yes, I do think bikes are popular in our country due to which India is a larger country and we need bikes to go from one distance to another.

✓ Yes, I do think bikes are popular in our country because India is a large country and we need bikes to go from one distance to another.

Due to which does not clearly connect the reason for bikes being popular with the following clause. Because is the appropriate conjunction for introducing a reason. Use because, since, or as when explaining why something happens.