Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答结构基本清楚：先直接回答“没有”，再说明想要自行车的原因。不过，“bar”应改为“bike”，“allowed”应改为“rode”，因为这里表示“骑车上学”。另外，最好使用“rode their bikes to school”这一完整表达，并加入一个具体结果或感受，使答案更自然。

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, but I really wanted one because all my friends rode their bikes to school. I often felt left out when they talked about cycling together.

제안: 回答了问题并表达了肯定观点，但有多处词汇和搭配错误：“bars”应为“bikes”，“confident”应为“popular”或“common”，“write”应为“ride”。“wanna buy, to write, to play”不自然，建议改为“children want to buy bikes and ride them with their friends”。可以补充成年人骑车通勤或骑车有助于锻炼等具体细节，并使用“because”连接原因。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Many children want to ride them with their friends because cycling is fun and also a good way to exercise. In some cities, adults also use bikes to commute.

× No, I didn't have a bar when I was a child, but I really wanted one because all my friends allowed theirs to school.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I really wanted one because all my friends rode theirs to school.

语境描述的是童年时期发生的事情，因此应使用过去时。这里的“allowed”表示“允许”，不能表达“骑车上学”的意思；“ride”的过去式是“rode”。另外，“bar”应为题目中的“bike”，这是词汇或听写问题，不属于语法错误。

× Yes, bars are very confident in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

“confident”表示“自信的”，通常用来描述人，不能表示某种交通工具受欢迎。“popular”表示“受欢迎的”，与问题中的“popular”相对应。这里将“bars”改为“bikes”是为了符合语境，主要属于词汇或听写问题。

× So many children wanna buy, to write, to play with friends.

✓ Many children want to buy bikes, ride them, and play with their friends.

原句中“buy”后缺少宾语，而且几个动作的结构不够完整、平行。应使用“want to + 动词原形”，并列表示三个动作：“buy bikes, ride them, and play”。“wanna”是非正式口语表达，正式回答中建议使用“want to”。“write”应为“ride”，这是词汇或听写问题。