Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 시제와 표현을 자연스럽게 정리해야 합니다. 어린 시절의 경험이므로 현재형인 “I have”보다 과거형인 “I had”를 사용하세요. “When I was a child, when I was five years old”처럼 같은 내용을 반복하지 말고, “ride a bicycle” 또는 “ride bikes”처럼 정확한 표현을 사용해야 합니다. 또한 마지막 문장은 “Thanks to her, I’m still good at riding a bike”로 간결하게 말하면 더 자연스럽습니다. 답변은 주제 문장, 구체적인 경험, 결과의 순서로 구성하세요.

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. When I was five, my mother bought me one and taught me how to ride it. Thanks to her, I became quite confident at cycling, and I still enjoy riding a bike today.

제안: 반복과 망설임을 줄이고 질문에 직접 답한 뒤 이유와 예시를 연결하세요. “my country’s capital named Seoul”은 “in Seoul, the capital of my country”로 표현하고, “There is so many”는 복수형에 맞춰 “There are many”로 고쳐야 합니다. “common bicycle”과 “bicycle Rd.”는 의미가 불분명하므로 “bike-sharing services”와 “dedicated bike lanes”처럼 정확한 어휘를 사용하세요. 서울을 구체적인 예로 제시하고 “because”나 “For example”을 활용하면 답변의 논리와 내용이 더 명확해집니다.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in Seoul, the capital city. There are many bike-sharing services and dedicated bike lanes, so cycling is convenient for both commuting and exercise. For example, many people ride along the Han River on weekends.

× Yes, I have a bicycle.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle.

The question asks about a past situation when you were a child, so use the past tense had instead of the present tense have.

× So thanks to her, now I'm I'm now still very good at riding at and riding on bicycle.

✓ So, thanks to her, I am still very good at riding a bicycle.

The correct preposition after good is at, but it should not be repeated before riding. Also, riding a bicycle is the natural expression; riding at or riding on a bicycle is incorrect in this context.

× So thanks to her, now I'm I'm now still very good at riding at and riding on bicycle.

✓ So, thanks to her, I am still very good at riding a bicycle.

A singular countable noun such as bicycle needs an article. Use a bicycle when speaking about one bicycle in general.

× Yes, I think my, the, I think bikes are popular in my country, uh, both of, uh, my country's capital named Seoul.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, especially in my country's capital, Seoul.

The original sentence contains repeated words and an incomplete phrase after both of. Use especially in to introduce a specific place, and place Seoul after the noun it identifies.

× There is so many, uh, common bicycle and also there are uh, bicycle Rd.

✓ There are so many common bicycles, and there are also bicycle roads.

Use there are with the plural noun bicycles, not there is. The form of be must agree with the noun that follows it.

× There is so many, uh, common bicycle and also there are uh, bicycle Rd.

✓ There are so many common bicycles, and there are also bicycle roads.

Bicycle must be plural because the sentence refers to many bicycles. Bicycle road should also be bicycle roads because it follows there are and refers to multiple roads.