Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly in the first sentence, then explain the reason clearly. Avoid the grammatical repetition in “because I when” and use the more natural expression “I was afraid to ride again” instead of “I never dared to ride a bike.” You could also add one specific detail about the accident to make the answer more vivid and complete.

예시: No, unfortunately, I didn’t have a bike as a child. When I first tried to ride one, I fell off and hurt my knee, so I became afraid of riding again. As a result, I never learned to cycle properly.

제안: Use a more natural opening such as “Yes, definitely,” and avoid repeating the same idea in the first two sentences. Correct “more numbers of bikes” to “there are more bikes” and use “than” rather than “rather than” for this comparison. Give a specific reason, such as cheaper travel, easier parking, or less traffic, and clarify whether you mean bicycles, motorbikes, or both.

예시: Yes, definitely. Bikes and scooters are extremely popular in my country because they’re affordable and convenient, especially in crowded cities. They can also get through narrow streets and are much easier to park than cars, so many people use them for their daily commute.

× Unfortunately, I did not have a bike when I was a child because I when I first learned to ride a bike I fell down and I got scared.

✓ Unfortunately, I did not have a bike when I was a child because, when I first learned to ride a bike, I fell down and got scared.

The phrase because I when is grammatically incorrect because it contains two unnecessary or incorrectly connected clauses. Use because to introduce the reason, and place the when-clause between commas. The subject I is also unnecessary before got scared because the same subject continues.

× So since then I never dared to ride a bike.

✓ So, since then, I have never dared to ride a bike.

Since then describes a situation that began in the past and continues up to the present. Therefore, use the present perfect have never dared rather than the simple past never dared.

× Absolutely yes. The bikes are very popular in my country.

✓ Absolutely, yes. Bikes are very popular in my country.

When speaking about bikes in general, do not use the definite article the before the plural noun bikes. The phrase the bikes refers to specific bikes that have already been identified.

× There are more numbers of bikes and scooters rather than the cars and buses here as it is easy to travel through many roads and also it's more comfortable.

✓ There are more bikes and scooters than cars and buses here because it is easy to travel on many roads, and they are also more comfortable.

More numbers of is not the correct quantifier expression here. Use more bikes and scooters directly. In a comparison, use more ... than, not more ... rather than. Also, because introduces the reason more naturally than as in this sentence.

× There are more numbers of bikes and scooters rather than the cars and buses here as it is easy to travel through many roads and also it's more comfortable.

✓ There are more bikes and scooters than cars and buses here because it is easy to travel on many roads, and they are also more comfortable.

The plural nouns cars and buses refer to vehicles in general, so they do not need the definite article the. Use cars and buses rather than the cars and buses.

× There are more numbers of bikes and scooters rather than the cars and buses here as it is easy to travel through many roads and also it's more comfortable.

✓ There are more bikes and scooters than cars and buses here because it is easy to travel on many roads, and they are also more comfortable.

The natural preposition used with roads when describing travel is on: travel on many roads. Through is generally used when moving inside or across an area, not simply for traveling along roads.

× There are more numbers of bikes and scooters rather than the cars and buses here as it is easy to travel through many roads and also it's more comfortable.

✓ There are more bikes and scooters than cars and buses here because it is easy to travel on many roads, and they are also more comfortable.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to the plural nouns bikes and scooters. Use the plural pronoun they. Using they makes the reference clear and maintains subject-pronoun agreement.