Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood. Several phrases are unclear or incorrectly chosen, such as “merchant shout,” “laughed to play a factor,” and “at the restaurant.” Use simple, accurate vocabulary instead of uncertain expressions. Add one or two specific details, such as who bought the bike, where you rode it, or how you felt. Keep the answer to two or three connected sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a small three-wheeled bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me, and I usually rode it outside our house after school or during the holidays. I really enjoyed riding it because it was fun and helped me become more confident.

제안: State your opinion clearly at the beginning, for example, “No, not really.” The phrase “one country in the city there makes space” is difficult to understand; explain that many cities are crowded and lack safe cycling lanes. Correct “the house is close to each other” to “the houses are close to each other.” Use a linking word such as “because” or “as a result” to connect your reason and conclusion, and include a specific comparison if possible.

예시: No, not really, especially in large cities. Many houses and buildings are close together, and there are not enough safe cycling lanes. As a result, people often prefer to use cars, buses, or motorcycles instead of riding bikes.

× Yes, I have a three wheel bike in a merchant shout.

✓ Yes, I had a three-wheel bike in a merchant shop.

The question asks about a situation in the past, so the past-tense form had is needed instead of the present-tense form have. Three-wheel should be hyphenated when it functions as a compound adjective before bike.

× I think no, not really, because one country in the city there makes space.

✓ I think not, because in the cities in my country, there is not much space.

Use the there is or there are structure to express the existence or absence of something. Space is an uncountable noun, so use there is not much space. The phrase in the cities in my country is also clearer and more natural.

× The house is close to each other, so we don't have space to ride bikes.

✓ The houses are close to each other, so we don't have space to ride bikes.

Each other refers to two or more things, so the noun should be plural: houses. The plural subject also requires the plural verb are rather than is.