Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly in the past tense and avoid hesitation fillers such as “uh” and “like.” Correct “I don’t had” to “I didn’t have,” “when I was child” to “when I was a child,” and “an cycle” to “a tricycle” or “a bicycle.” Make the answer more effective by clearly explaining what you used instead of a bike.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bicycle when I was a child because I didn’t know how to ride one. Instead, I had a tricycle, which was easier and safer for me to use.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and organize the reasons with linking words such as “because” and “especially.” Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases like “get reached to our destinations” and “in the rush.” Use natural expressions such as “reach our destinations,” “avoid traffic jams,” and “during rush hour.” Add one specific detail about who uses bikes or why they are convenient.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. They are convenient and affordable, and they help people avoid traffic jams during rush hour. Many students and office workers use them to reach their destinations more quickly.

× No, I don't had a bike when I was child because, uh, at that time like I was not able to ride a bike, but uh, I think I had an cycle.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because, at that time, I was not able to ride a bike, but I think I had a cycle.

Because the question asks about the past, the auxiliary verb must be in the past tense: use did, not do. After did, use the base form have, not had. Practice past negative sentences with this pattern: subject + did not/didn't + base verb.

× No, I don't had a bike when I was child because, uh, at that time like I was not able to ride a bike, but uh, I think I had an cycle.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because, at that time, I was not able to ride a bike, but I think I had a cycle.

The phrase child needs the indefinite article a because it refers to one child in a general meaning: a child. Also, cycle begins with a consonant sound, so use a cycle, not an cycle. Use a before consonant sounds and an before vowel sounds.

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country because as we know bikes are much easier to carry they help us to get out to get to get reached to our destinations in time specifically in the rush like in the rush or in the heavy traffic area.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because, as we know, they are easy to use and help us get to our destinations on time, especially during rush hour or in heavy traffic.

The original sentence combines several incomplete and repeated phrases without clear structure. The sequence get out to get to get reached is not grammatically organized. Use a clear verb phrase such as help us get to our destinations. Divide ideas with commas and use a natural expression such as during rush hour.

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country because as we know bikes are much easier to carry they help us to get out to get to get reached to our destinations in time specifically in the rush like in the rush or in the heavy traffic area.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because, as we know, they are easy to use and help us get to our destinations on time, especially during rush hour or in heavy traffic.

Use get to a destination, not get reached to a destination. Also, the natural preposition for rush hour is during, as in during rush hour. Use in heavy traffic rather than in the heavy traffic area when referring to difficult traffic conditions.