Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear and consistent in vocabulary, avoid contradictions, reduce hesitations, and structure the answer with a direct topic sentence followed by a brief explanation. For example, start with a single clear statement (Yes/No), then give one reason with a specific detail and a linking word. Also keep the reply to no more than 3–4 short sentences and replace fillers (uh, umm) with brief pauses.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I preferred walking and playing outdoors instead, because my family lived close to school. As a result, we rarely needed bicycles.

제안: Give a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and a linking phrase. Avoid repetitions and hesitations. Mention concrete examples (e.g., busy public transport, safety concerns, road conditions) to make your answer more convincing and natural.

예시: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country. This is mainly because most people prefer public transport like buses and trains, which are frequent and cheap. Moreover, many cities have heavy traffic and few bike lanes, so cycling can feel unsafe.

× No, I didn't, because I don't like uh, bike, but I preferred uh, a bicycle.

✓ No, I didn't, because I didn't like bikes, but I preferred a bicycle.

Errors: 'I don't like bike' mixes tenses and uses singular 'bike' uncountably. The question refers to the past ('when you were a child'), so use past tense 'didn't like'. Use plural 'bikes' for a general dislike or 'a bike' with 'didn't like a bike' if referring to the concept. Also 'preferred' is past so keep it. Suggestion: match tense to the context (past) and use countable noun correctly: 'I didn't like bikes' or 'I didn't like riding a bike'. Second sentence explanation: keep consistent past tense and use 'a bicycle' is fine for contrast but ensure the first clause is past: 'I didn't like bikes, but I preferred a bicycle.'

× No, I think not because, uh, the people, uh, use were umm, social transport and don't like, don't like the bike.

✓ No, I don't think so, because people use public transport and don't like bikes.

Errors: The reply mixes present and past ('I think not' is unnatural; 'use were' is incorrect word order and unnecessary 'were'). Use 'I don't think so' for a present opinion. 'The people' is awkward; use 'people' or 'many people'. 'Social transport' is incorrect word choice; the intended phrase is 'public transport'. Finally use plural 'bikes' for general dislike. Suggestion: simplify to a present-tense opinion with correct noun phrases: 'No, I don't think so, because many people use public transport and don't like bikes.'