Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, grammatical, and add one or two brief supporting details. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “No, I didn’t.”), correct tense and articles, and optionally give a reason or brief consequence using a linking word (e.g., “because” or “so”). Keep it natural and within 1–3 sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. As a result, I usually walked to school or took the bus.

제안: Respond directly and provide specific supporting details. Start with a clear opinion (e.g., “Yes, bikes are quite popular.”), then explain why using linking words such as “because” or “mainly” and give one or two examples (urban commuting, exercise, cost). Avoid rhetorical questions that confuse the examiner.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people cycle to work in busy cities to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× When I was child that time I had no bike.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike.

The phrase 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a' before the singular noun 'child' (singular and plural/article issue). Also, the sentence uses a past situation; the negative past simple should be formed with 'didn't have' rather than 'had no' for natural spoken English. Suggested improvement: include the indefinite article before 'child' and use the correct past simple negative form: 'When I was a child, I didn't have a bike.'

× Yeah, my country is popular for why?

✓ Yes. Are bikes popular in my country? Why do you ask?

The student's reply is ungrammatical and unclear. 'My country is popular for why?' mixes statement and interrogative structures and misorders words. To respond to the examiner's question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' a clear answer should either state an opinion ('Yes, bikes are popular in my country.') or ask for clarification ('Why do you ask?'). Suggested improvement: give a direct yes/no opinion and, if asking a question back, use a correct question form such as 'Why do you ask?'