Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be more natural and slightly expanded with a linking phrase and one specific detail about the scooter or how you used it. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid unnecessary repetition.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I had a small scooter that my uncle gave me for my tenth birthday, and I used it to ride around the neighborhood every afternoon. It was very light and easy to handle, so I often rode it to my friends' houses.

제안: Your main idea is relevant, but the response has grammar mistakes, some awkward phrasing and redundancies. Improve coherence with linking words, correct grammar (e.g., 'roads' not 'Rd.'), and add a specific example or statistic. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and fuel-efficient. In addition, our roads are often narrow, so bikes are more convenient than cars for daily commutes. For example, many people use motorcycles to travel to work or to visit local markets.

× No, I did not have a bike, but I used to have a scooter which was gifted to me by my uncle on my 10th birthday.

✓ No, I did not have a bike, but I had a scooter that my uncle gave me for my 10th birthday.

The phrase 'used to have' is acceptable but slightly redundant with 'did not have' context; more natural is 'I had a scooter.' Also 'which was gifted to me by my uncle' is wordy and passive. Use simple past 'gave' for clarity and naturalness. Suggestion: prefer active simple past ('gave') and use 'that' instead of 'which' for defining clauses. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Yes I would say so since it is cheap and it is very much reliable.

✓ Yes, I would say so because they are cheap and very reliable.

The student uses singular pronoun 'it' to refer to 'bikes' (plural). Pronouns must agree in number with their antecedent. Also 'very much reliable' is incorrect collocation; use 'very reliable.' Suggestion: use plural pronoun 'they' and natural adverb placement 'very reliable.' Grammar problem type ID:12

× Most of the people use it and you.

✓ Most people use them.

'Most of the people' is awkward; 'most people' is more natural. The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'bikes' (plural) so should be 'them.' The fragment 'and you' is unclear and unnecessary; remove it. Ensure subject-verb agreement and pronoun number agreement. Grammar problem type ID:27

× Since our Rd. is also narrow, it is perfect for the day-to-day commute to travel to the work from home.

✓ Since our road is narrow, they are perfect for day-to-day commutes from home to work.

Multiple preposition and word order errors: 'Rd.' should be 'road.' 'Perfect for the day-to-day commute to travel to the work from home' is ungrammatical. Use 'for day-to-day commutes' and the common order 'from home to work.' Also match plural 'they' with 'bikes.' Suggestion: reorder phrase and use correct prepositions 'for' and 'from...to.' Grammar problem type ID:11