Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer simply repeated the examiner's question and did not respond. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no), add one or two specific supporting details using linking words, and keep it concise (no more than 5 sentences). For example, state whether you had a bike, mention when or what kind, and include a brief reason or memory.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that I got for my seventh birthday. Because my house was near a quiet park, I spent most afternoons riding there with my friends. This helped me become more confident and independent.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors, unclear phrasing, and lacks specific details. To improve: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), use correct grammar (plural/singular, verb forms), add a specific example or statistic, and use linking words (for example, because, therefore, moreover) to connect ideas. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, families often cycle to local parks at weekends, and some cities have bike-sharing programs. Moreover, cycling is affordable and convenient for commuting short distances, so it remains a common choice.

× I do think that bikes are popular in our country because most child or adults going use it on going park or somewhere near their house or

✓ I do think that bikes are popular in our country because most children or adults go to parks or somewhere near their houses.

Errors identified: 'child' should be plural 'children' to agree with 'most' (Singular and plural issue, but categorized here as Third person singular issue per list requirement), 'adults' is fine but the verb phrase 'going use it on going park' is ungrammatical. Correct verb is 'go' for plural subjects: 'children or adults go'. Use plural nouns with 'their' and plural 'houses'. Use 'to parks' or 'to a park' for destination. Replace 'it' with no pronoun or 'bikes' if needed. Suggestions: use plural nouns after quantifiers (most children), use base verb 'go' for present simple with plural subjects, simplify to 'go to parks or somewhere near their houses.'