Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and direct, but to score higher include a brief topic sentence followed by a specific detail and a linking phrase. Avoid vague phrasing like "made my day" without elaboration. Keep it natural and within 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes — I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for my eighth birthday, and I used it every day to ride to the park and visit friends. Because it let me travel independently, I remember feeling very proud and excited.

제안: The answer addresses the question but is too short and contains grammar issues. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details and a linking word (e.g., "however" or "but") to contrast bikes with motorcycles. Use plural agreement and natural phrasing.

예시: Bicycles are somewhat common in my country, but motorcycles are more popular. For example, many people prefer motorcycles because they are faster and better suited to long distances, whereas bicycles are mainly used for short trips or exercise.

× Yes, I did. My father bought it for me, and it really made my day back then.

✓ Yes, I did. My father bought it for me, and it really made my day back then.

No correction needed. The sentence uses past tense appropriately (bought, made) to describe a past event. There is no present participle error or other grammar issue to fix. Suggestion: none; sentence is correct as written.

× Yes they are but they mostly use motorcycles.

✓ Yes, they are, but most people use motorcycles.

The original sentence has a clarity and agreement issue. 'Yes they are' is acceptable but missing a comma after 'Yes' for natural speech punctuation and 'they mostly use motorcycles' uses 'they' ambiguously (referring to 'bikes' vs 'people'). Context implies you mean 'people' in the country. Replacing 'they' with 'most people' clarifies the subject and maintains correct subject-verb agreement. Also add a comma after 'Yes' and before 'but' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: use clear subjects (people) and include commas for conversational responses.