Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrasing. Focus on simple past tense for childhood, use natural collocations (e.g., "I preferred skating to riding a bike").

예시: Yes. I didn't have a bike for most of my childhood because I preferred skating. For example, I spent weekends at the park practicing roller skates, so I rarely learned to ride a bicycle until I was older.

제안: Answer directly, then support with clear reasons and specific details. Use correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., "not really", "people prefer cars and motorcycles"). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas. Avoid informal phrases and unclear expressions.

예시: Not really. People in my country prefer cars and motorcycles because they are faster and more convenient for long distances. For instance, many families own a car for commuting and motorcycles are common for short trips in cities.

× Initially I had distinct choices about the situation because I always rather to use skates instead of bike, so it's makes me delighted much.

✓ Initially I had distinct choices about the situation because I always preferred using skates instead of a bike, so it made me very happy.

Errors: 'rather to use' is incorrect; after 'prefer' or 'rather' use verb+ -ing or 'to' depending on structure. Here 'preferred using' is natural. This is Verb + -ing form error (ID 8). Also 'instead of bike' needs an article ('a bike') and 'it's makes me delighted much' has multiple issues: 'it's makes' is wrong (subject-verb), 'delighted much' is unnatural; use 'made me very happy' to match past reference. Suggestion: use 'preferred using' or 'would rather use' and correct articles and verb agreement, e.g., 'I always preferred using skates instead of a bike, so it made me very happy.'

× Not actually especially people's consciousness won't load this so we're gonna say the only vehicles are popular in my country is car and motorcycles

✓ Not really; people are not aware of this, so we can say the only popular vehicles in my country are cars and motorcycles.

Errors: 'Not actually especially people's consciousness won't load this' contains unclear phrasing and missing articles; 'the only vehicles are popular in my country is car and motorcycles' has article and number errors. This is Article errors (ID 22) and subject-verb agreement/number issues. Correction fixes articles and plural nouns: 'cars' (not 'car') and 'motorcycles'. Also replace informal 'we're gonna' with 'we can' and simplify awkward phrase to 'people are not aware of this.' Suggestion: use appropriate articles ('the') and plural nouns when listing multiple items, and use clearer phrasing for 'people's awareness.'