Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and add a brief supporting detail to make the answer natural and informative. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one specific detail (where you rode it, who you rode with, or what you liked about it). Keep it to no more than 2–3 sentences and use a linking word if adding information.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a red bicycle that I used to ride around my neighborhood after school. For example, I often rode with my older brother to the park, which helped me gain confidence on the road.

제안: Provide a clearer topic sentence and support it with a specific reason or example. Use a linking word (for example, because, so) to connect the opinion and the explanation. Avoid vague phrases like “so popular”; quantify or illustrate the popularity briefly.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among young people, because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many students cycle to university, and cities have expanded bike lanes to accommodate them.

× Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

This sentence uses an unnecessary auxiliary verb 'did' with the main verb 'have' in a positive past-tense statement. In simple past affirmative sentences, use the past form of the main verb (had) without 'did'. Suggestion: use 'I had' for clear, grammatically correct past-tense statements. Note: This falls under past tense/auxiliary misuse related to 'Past tense issue' (ID 5).

× Yes, in my country bikes are so popular among young people.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular among young people in my country.

Sentence is understandable but the phrasing and word order sound slightly unnatural. 'So popular' is informal and 'in my country' is more naturally placed at the end. Use 'very popular' for standard formality and place 'in my country' after the clause: 'bikes are very popular among young people in my country.' This is a wording and adverb placement issue related to adverb placement/usage (ID 20).