Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, tense and naturalness. Use past tense for childhood, give a clear topic sentence and add one or two brief supporting details (reason or memory). Keep it under five sentences and use linking words if adding details.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a small apartment and my parents thought it was unsafe to let me ride alone, so I mostly walked to school. However, I remember sometimes borrowing a neighbor’s bike on weekends.

제안: Correct grammar (use present simple), make the response more specific and cohesive by adding linking words and concrete examples (who uses bikes, where, and why). Keep answers concise and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people, especially students and office workers, use them for short commutes because they are cheap and avoid traffic. For example, in my city you can see bike lanes and shared-bike stations near subway stops.

× No, I don't have any bike when I am a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so the response should use past tense. 'Don't have' is present tense; 'didn't have' is past. Also use 'a bike' (singular with article) rather than 'any bike' in a negative past simple statement. Suggestion: match the tense of the question by using past simple: 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. Many people using bike.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. Many people use bikes.

The clause 'Many people using bike' lacks an appropriate verb form and has incorrect noun form. Use the simple present 'use' for habitual actions and plural 'bikes' to match 'many people.' Suggestion: say 'Many people use bikes.'

× Bike is a very helpful transportation.

✓ A bike is a very useful means of transportation.

'Bike' as a subject needs an article ('a bike') or plural ('bikes'). 'Helpful transportation' is unnatural; use 'useful' and 'means of transportation' or 'transportation' uncountable. Suggestion: use natural collocation 'a bike is a very useful means of transportation.'

× Also I like bike.

✓ Also, I like bikes.

When speaking generally about a kind of thing, use the plural ('bikes') or 'a bike' for a single item. 'I like bike' is incorrect. Also add a comma after 'Also' in writing. Suggestion: 'Also, I like bikes.'