Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). For example, state whether you had a bike, mention when you got it or who gave it to you, and describe one memory or how often you used it.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day. Because of that, I became more confident and active, and I still enjoy cycling for exercise now.

제안: Again, you repeated the question instead of giving your opinion. To improve, start with a clear opinion (Yes/No/Partly), then support it with specific reasons and examples using linking words (e.g., however, for example, because). Be concise and use relevant vocabulary about transport and popularity.

예시: I think bikes are moderately popular in my country. For example, many people in cities use bicycles for short commutes because they are cheap and practical, but car ownership has increased recently, so bikes are less common for longer trips. Therefore, while cycling is visible in urban areas and among students, it is not the dominant mode of transport nationwide.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's response repeated the examiner's past-tense question instead of answering. This is a present tense issue because the reply should use past tense to match 'when you were a child.' Use 'had' for past possession. Suggestion: answer directly using past tense verbs (I had, I played, I used) and avoid echoing the question.

× Did you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student used past tense 'Did you think' while the examiner's question asks about a current general belief, so present simple 'Do you think' is required. This is a present tense issue. Use 'do' + base verb for present simple questions about opinions. Suggestion: match the tense to the time frame of the question (use 'do' for present opinions).