Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

연습Part12026-09-26 12:31:00

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Part 1

시험관

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

수험생

No, I don't have any bike.

시험관

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

수험생

Yes, bikes are popular in India because everyone is using for daily activities.

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총점

총점: 5.5유창성과 일관성: 5.5발음: 5.5문법: 5.5어휘: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

점수: 45.0

제안: Use past tense and give a concise reason or brief detail. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it natural and no more than 3–4 short sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because my family lived nearby and we couldn't afford a bike. As a result, I became used to walking long distances.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

점수: 60.0

제안: Improve grammar (use present continuous or simple present correctly), be more specific with examples and use a linking word to connect ideas. Provide one or two concrete reasons or examples to support your opinion within 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in India because many people use them for daily commuting and running errands. For example, students and office workers often ride motorcycles or scooters to avoid traffic and save time.

문법

Incorrect tense and verb form (Present vs Past)

× No, I don't have any bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The question asks about possession 'when you were a child', which is past time, so the student must use past tense. Also 'any bike' is unidiomatic with singular countable noun; use 'a bike'. Suggestion: use past simple 'didn't have' and 'a' for one countable noun: 'No, I didn't have a bike.'

Incorrect verb form and preposition use

× Yes, bikes are popular in India because everyone is using for daily activities.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in India because everyone uses them for daily activities.

The clause should use simple present 'uses' for habitual actions rather than present continuous. 'Everyone' is singular so verb 'uses' must be third person singular. Also 'using' needs an object and the pronoun 'them' refers back to 'bikes'. 'For daily activities' is acceptable but more natural is 'for their daily activities' or simply 'for daily activities.' Suggestion: use 'everyone uses them' for clarity and correct subject-verb agreement.

중요 어휘

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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