Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct the tense and make the reply more natural and slightly expanded. Begin with a clear topic sentence using past tense, then add one or two brief supporting details (where you got it, how you used it, or a memory). Use linking words if adding details.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me on my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it to the park every afternoon.

제안: Use correct grammar (plural and article) and provide a brief reason or example. Start with a direct statement, then add a specific supporting detail with a linking word to explain why they are popular (e.g., convenience, cost, environment, culture).

예시: Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or school in crowded cities, especially during rush hour.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with the past time expression 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'had' to match the past time context. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs for actions or states that occurred in the past (e.g., 'I had', 'I lived').

× Yes, bike is popular in our country

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country.

The speaker used the singular noun 'bike' without an article, but the general statement about popularity requires a plural noun or the definite article. Use the plural 'bikes' with the plural verb 'are' to express a general truth. Suggestion: For general facts about a category, use plural nouns (e.g., 'Cars are common') or use 'the' with a singular countable noun if referring to the category as a whole (e.g., 'The car is useful').