Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, clarity and add a short specific detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, use past tense correctly (e.g., "I had" or "I wanted"), and give one brief supporting detail using a linking word (e.g., "because" or "so"). Keep it natural and no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it to visit my grandparents every weekend. Because I practiced often, I learned to ride without the training wheels by the time I was eight.

제안: Make the sentence grammatically correct and expand with a specific reason or example. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use a linking word (e.g., "because", "for example") to provide a concrete reason or situation that shows popularity. Keep it concise and natural.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in cities you can see bike lanes and many students and office workers cycling to school or work.

× Yes, I hoped bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used 'hoped' which is the past tense of 'hope' and does not fit the meaning; the correct verb for possession in the past is 'have' (past 'had'). Additionally, the noun 'bike' needs an article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun. Suggestion: use 'had' for past possession and include the indefinite article: 'I had a bike.'

× Yes, bike is popular in our country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country.

The student used the singular noun 'bike' with a general statement about popularity. In English, when making generalizations about a category, we typically use the plural form without an article ('bikes are') or use 'the bike is' with a specific meaning. Also the verb must agree with the plural subject ('are'). Suggestion: use the plural noun 'bikes' and the plural verb 'are' for general statements: 'Bikes are popular in our country.'