Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct answer (affirmative or negative) with a short supporting detail. Keep it natural and avoid repeating the examiner's question. Use one or two linking words if you add more information. Be specific about age, who gave it to you, or how often you used it.

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven from my parents, and I used it almost every day to ride to my friend’s house and to the nearby park.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No or A lot/Few) and then provide specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, because, so, therefore) and correct basic grammar (subject-verb agreement). Instead of vague words like “everybody,” give concrete groups or reasons why bikes are popular and mention frequency or contexts where people use them.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for daily commuting and short trips. For example, students and workers often ride to school or work, and in smaller towns bikes are more common than cars because they are cheaper and easier to park.

× Yeah, 'cause everybody in my country have bikes and yeah, it's often daily.

✓ Yeah, 'cause everybody in my country has bikes and, yeah, they use them regularly.

The subject 'everybody' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'it's often daily' is ungrammatical: 'it' does not clearly refer to an action and 'daily' needs a verb phrase; 'they use them regularly' clearly expresses frequency. Suggestion: match singular subjects like 'everybody' with singular verbs (has), avoid vague pronoun references, and use appropriate adverbs or verb phrases to describe frequency (e.g., 'use them daily' or 'use them regularly').

× 'cause everybody in my country have bikes and yeah, it's often daily.

✓ 'Cause everybody in my country has bikes and, yeah, they use them regularly.

The sentence uses 'it' to refer to the frequency, but 'it' does not correctly refer to 'people using bikes.' Replacing 'it' with 'they' makes the pronoun agree in number with 'everybody' as a plural idea (people) in natural usage when referring to individuals' actions. Also replace 'bikes' object reference with 'them' for clarity. Suggestion: ensure pronouns clearly and correctly match their antecedents in number and meaning; use 'they' and 'them' when referring to the people and their bikes' actions.