Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct and clear, which is good for Part 1. To improve, expand slightly with one or two supporting details (reason or brief consequence) using a linking word so the response sounds more natural and informative. Keep it concise (no more than 3–4 short sentences).

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a small apartment and my parents preferred I walk to school. As a result, I learned to be comfortable walking short distances, and I only started cycling regularly as a teenager.

제안: This is a strong response: it answers directly, gives reasons and an example. To reach a higher score, add a linking phrase to improve cohesion, and include a more specific detail (a statistic, comparison, or a brief personal observation) to show richer content and vocabulary. Keep it within 4–5 sentences and avoid repetition of words like “bike.”

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and ideal for short journeys in congested cities. For instance, many commuters use bike-sharing schemes to travel to work, and usage spikes on sunny days. In fact, I’ve noticed bike lanes have doubled in my city over the past five years, which has made cycling much more convenient.

× I did not have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence uses a full form 'did not', which is grammatically correct but sounds formal in spoken English. Change to the contracted form 'didn’t' to match natural spoken style. This is a style preference rather than a grammatical error; keep past tense 'did' and 'was' as they correctly refer to a past state.

× Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and useful for short trips in busy cities.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and useful for short trips in busy cities.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change is required. It uses the present simple appropriately to state a general fact. Maintain the adjective 'useful' and plural 'bikes' to match meaning.

× For example, many people use bike sharing services to go to work or the shops, and they sometimes ride the bike when the weather is nice.

✓ For example, many people use bike-sharing services to go to work or the shops, and they sometimes ride bikes when the weather is nice.

Change 'bike sharing' to the compound adjective 'bike-sharing' for correct noun phrase formation. Also change 'ride the bike' to 'ride bikes' to match the general reference to people riding bicycles (plural) and to avoid implying one specific bike. The verbs and tenses are correct (present simple for habitual actions).