Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with grammar and tense consistency. Use past tense for past events and start with a clear topic sentence. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 3–4 short sentences). Add one brief supporting detail (e.g., how you used it or a memory) and use a linking word if needed.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it to ride to school and visit friends almost every day, so it was an important part of my childhood.

제안: Improve sentence clarity and remove fillers. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., because, for example). Avoid repetition and correct article use (e.g., 'in India' not 'in the India').

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in India because individual transport is common and affordable. For example, many people use motorcycles and scooters daily to commute to work and run errands.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past time marker 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'had' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past states (I had a bike).

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, like individual transports are very common and essential in the in India.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country; individual modes of transport are very common and essential in India.

Problems: unnecessary 'the' before 'in India' and awkward phrase 'individual transports'. 'The' should be removed before country name, and 'modes of transport' is the idiomatic phrase. Also use punctuation to separate clauses. Suggestion: say 'individual modes of transport' and omit 'the' before country names. Replace comma with semicolon or period for clarity.

× So I think bikes are more important.

✓ So I think bikes are very important.

'More important' implies a comparison but no comparison target is given. The intended meaning is degree rather than comparison, so use 'very important'. Suggestion: if comparing, specify what bikes are more important than; otherwise use an intensifier like 'very'.

× Uh, it is the daily transportation in India.

✓ Uh, they are a common means of daily transportation in India.

Using 'it' and 'the' is incorrect because 'bikes' is plural and general. Use plural pronoun 'they' or repeat 'bikes' and use 'a common means of daily transportation' to express general habit. Suggestion: match number and use appropriate noun phrase for general statements about transportation.