Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Gợi ý: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và phát âm, dùng câu trả lời trực tiếp, dùng từ vựng chính xác và chia động từ đúng thì. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, ví dụ: "Yes, I did." (2) Sửa lỗi từ và chính tả (bike thay cho "rabbi"/"Riobi", "birthday" thay cho "seventh birthday") và dùng thì quá khứ hoàn chỉnh: "my parents bought it for my seventh birthday." (3) Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể, liên kết bằng từ nối (for example, so, and) để câu mạch lạc. (4) Giữ không quá 3-4 câu để tránh lặp và dư thừa.

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it almost every afternoon with my friends. Because we lived near a park, I spent most of my free time practicing tricks and exploring the neighbourhood.

제안: Gợi ý: Cần tổ chức ý rõ ràng, dùng liên từ để nối các ý và sửa ngữ pháp. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu trả lời trực tiếp: "Yes, I think so." (2) Sử dụng liên từ như "because" hoặc "for example" để giải thích lý do. (3) Sửa cấu trúc: "People often ride bicycles to go to work or to exercise, especially because of severe traffic jams." (4) Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể hoặc so sánh để tăng tính thuyết phục và tránh lặp lại từ ngữ.

예시: Yes, I think so. Many people in my country ride bicycles to commute to work or to get exercise, mainly because traffic jams make driving inconvenient. For example, in big cities you can see many commuters cycling in the morning to avoid long delays.

× Jad absolutely I actually have a rabbi that my parents bought for me in my seventh birthday I spend all of my free time to Riobi with my friend.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I actually had a bicycle that my parents bought for me on my seventh birthday. I spent all of my free time riding it with my friends.

This sentence contains multiple sentence structure and tense errors. 'Jad' should be 'Yes'; 'have' should be past 'had' because the question asks about childhood (present vs past tense error). 'rabbi' and 'Riobi' are misspellings of 'bicycle' and 'riding'. 'in my seventh birthday' is incorrect preposition and article use; correct form is 'on my seventh birthday'. 'I spend' should be past tense 'I spent' to match past time frame. 'to Riobi' incorrectly uses 'to' before a gerund; use the gerund 'riding'. Also plural agreement: 'my friend' -> 'my friends' to match general activity with peers. Suggestions: separate into clear sentences, use past tense consistently for past events, replace misspelled words, use 'on' with birthdays, and use gerund without 'to'.

× People in my country often ride a bicycle for to go to work, do some exercise because of traffic jam more people in my country do ride bicycles

✓ People in my country often ride bicycles to go to work and to exercise because of traffic jams; more people here do ride bicycles.

Errors include incorrect use of 'for to go'—use either 'to go' or 'for going', but 'to go' is natural. 'Do some exercise' is grammatical but better as 'to exercise' for parallelism. 'Traffic jam' should be plural 'traffic jams' when speaking generally. Sentence structure is run-on; add conjunctions or punctuation. Also use plural 'bicycles' to match general statement. Suggestions: use parallel infinitives ('to go', 'to exercise'), pluralize count nouns for general situations, and break run-on sentences with conjunctions or punctuation.