Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct and grammatically correct, but it is very short and lacks development. To improve, give a brief reason or short detail to expand the response (one or two supporting sentences), use a linking word if adding details, and avoid fillers. Keep total length under five sentences and stay natural.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a small apartment and we rarely had space to store one. However, I sometimes borrowed my cousin's bike to ride in the park on weekends.

제안: Your response communicates ideas but is informal and contains hesitations and repetition. To improve, use a clear topic sentence, organize supporting points with linking words (for example, 'Firstly', 'Moreover'), avoid fillers ('you know', 'uh'), and provide specific examples or brief reasons. Stay within 3–4 coherent sentences and use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'commonly used', 'cost-effective').

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Firstly, they are cost-effective and help people save money on transport. Moreover, many people cycle for exercise and to avoid traffic, so you'll see lots of commuters riding bikes during rush hour.

× Yeah, this is very popular in our country.

✓ Yeah, bikes are very popular in our country.

The original uses 'this' and 'is' which is unclear and mismatches plural 'bikes' mentioned in context. Use the plural noun 'bikes' with the present simple verb 'are' to make subject and verb agree and to clearly refer to the general topic. Suggestion: use 'bikes are' when speaking about bikes in general.

× You know, like, uh, it's also economical.

✓ They are also economical.

The sentence uses 'it' to refer to the plural 'bikes', causing a mismatch and informal filler words. Replace the pronoun with the correct plural subject 'they' and keep present simple 'are'. Also avoid filler words like 'uh' for clearer speech.

× It's, uh, you know, it's a very good exercise.

✓ They are, you know, very good exercise.

Again 'it' is used for plural 'bikes'; 'exercise' is an uncountable noun used here as a general activity so no article 'a' is needed. Use 'very good exercise' and plural 'they are'. Remove fillers for clarity.

× We should go office in bikes.

✓ We should go to the office by bike.

Prepositions and expressions of transport are incorrect. Use 'go to the office' for destination and 'by bike' to indicate mode of transport. Also use singular 'bike' in 'by bike' as the idiomatic expression; alternatively 'on bikes' can be used if emphasizing multiple people riding.