Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be grammatically accurate, expand slightly with a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail. Use past tense for past experiences and avoid one-word replies. For example say you had a bike, describe what kind it was or how you used it, and include a linking phrase to make it natural.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was a child, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend. Because I practised often, I became confident riding without the training wheels within a few months.

제안: Give a clear direct answer, use linking words for coherence, correct grammar and be specific. Avoid fragmented phrases and irrelevant mentions. State your opinion, support it with reasons or examples, and use appropriate connectors (e.g., because, moreover, for example).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many children enjoy riding them for fun and exercise. Moreover, cycling is supported by good local clubs and some Malaysian cyclists have become famous internationally, which has increased interest in the sport.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a past-tense question ('Did you have... when you were a child?') so the student should answer in the past simple. Using 'have' (present) is incorrect here; the correct short answer to a past question is 'Yes, I did.' Suggestion: match the tense of short answers to the question (use past simple 'did').

× I think yes cause most of the children like to ride bike and one of and there are also some athletes from Malaysia, they're very famous.

✓ I think so, because most children like to ride bikes, and there are also some very famous athletes from Malaysia.

This sentence has multiple errors: 'cause' is informal and should be 'because' for clarity; 'I think yes' is unnatural—use 'I think so'; 'most of the children' can be 'most children' (article unnecessary); 'ride bike' needs plural 'bikes'; the fragment 'one of and' is incorrect and removed; punctuation and coordination are incorrect—use commas and 'and' to join clauses. Suggestion: break ideas into clear clauses, use 'because' to introduce reasons, pluralize countable nouns, and remove extraneous fragments.