Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with tense consistency and provide a clearer, direct topic sentence. Start by answering the question in past tense (since it asks about childhood), then add one brief supporting detail. Keep it within 1–3 sentences and avoid repeating phrases.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I started riding a bicycle regularly when I was in high school to go to school because it was cheap and convenient.

제안: Good content and clear reasons, but reduce repetition, improve sentence flow and use linking words for coherence. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences), use a wider range of vocabulary (e.g., 'prevalent', 'commuters'), and correct minor grammar (plural forms and articles).

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are convenient and inexpensive for short trips. Moreover, you can see them everywhere, especially in cities and around universities, where many commuters prefer them to avoid traffic and save money.

× No, I don't have a bike, but I usually ride a bike to school when I was high school.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike, but I usually rode a bike to school when I was in high school.

Mixed tense and article/time reference errors: the question asks about the past (when you were a child), so use past tense 'didn't have' and 'rode'. Also include the preposition 'in' before 'high school' to indicate the period. Ensure tense consistency across the sentence.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are convenient and inexpensive for short journeys and you can see you can see them everywhere, especially in cities and universities area where people prefer them to avoid traffic and save money.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are convenient and inexpensive for short journeys, and you can see them everywhere, especially in cities and university areas where people prefer them to avoid traffic and save money.

Repetition and noun phrase errors: remove the duplicated phrase 'you can see' and correct 'universities area' to 'university areas' (plural noun as an adjective+noun). The present tense 'are' is correct; this fixes redundancy and noun form for clarity and grammatical correctness.